This was a wonderful story. Sadly it's over. And i've just seen this homepage this year. So i am very late for the review, but still... i've loved it. Read it at home, on the train and even in the office.
Thanks for it.
It is high praise indeed to hear that you even read my story in the office. Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me how you liked it. I always love hearing from readers.
loved the ending
Thank you, so much!
cute all i can say is cute :)
to be honest i didnt understand the first part. her being in her bed, then in castles bed i was really confused
Well, it was a way of interweaving the flashbacks with her current action, following her thoughts back and forth. My critics all assured me they could follow it... Sorry about that.
omg that last line " Do you know someone like that?" omg that got me
I love that too! Thanks for the review!
You are amazing. This stroy captures the essence of Castle so beautifully, it made me tear up in the end. The rhythm of the story was beautiful and the desription was fantastic. A gorgeously done work........you should be proud of this.
Thank you for your kind comments, and for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. I am very proud of this work. I also find myself very reluctant to jumpp in to another one, owing to the huge commitment level. :-)
I really love where you went with this story. I laughed and cried in many parts. This is great. I would love to see this happen on Castle. (though i would like castle to continue on and not end there) Great job. :D
why the hell dod you make them sleep together???? they have to be together and in love not a one night stand!!!!!!!!!
Don't judge a book by its cover... or a story by first chapter. There's a lot more to it than 'just a one-night stand'. Oh yeah, and bear in mind this is a season 2 story, they haven't figured out they're in love yet.
Waiting for the rest of this. Please keep writing this is GREAT! Update soon.
I love this....keep it going...Please update soon! :) Real soon! :D
I like it, but I still can't understand why she's so distant with him. You've brought her closer to him and it''s great. I hope she gives him a chance sooner than later. I guess I'm just a bit old fashioned and don't believe in single parenthood, at least not when you have a father who loves you, who you love, and who wants to do it the right way.
I hear you. Beckett is a character who doesn't like to feel vulnerable and is very reserved. I can only push her so fast... She's ready to give him a chance. Stay tuned.
Still loving this story and can't wait to see where you are going to take this.
You really made me laugh with the 'Windsor Castle' line - classic !!!
Here's to the next chapter x
I think you devleoped the characters and dealt with situations realistically (for Castle and Beckett) and I liked the whole thing; a gradual growth of the relationship, good job.
I am looking forward to more chapters!
I am enjoying this story, the banter, Becket's inner turmoil, etc.
I also plan to watch Firefly in the next month or so once I get settled into my new place.
Keep up the great work!
I know, I know! Working on it! :-)
In rough draft form, I'm on the final scene of the final chapter. However, I'm not even done typing up chapter 19 and then I have lots of editing. Thanks for being patient.
Ugh... the WAITING... for the next chapter... must... have... more... LOL
Seriously though, love the story. Very well written, and you capture the emotions perfectly. Keep up the great work!
I love the Firefly references they fit in really well.
This is a good chapter - but I'm hoping that Beckett does actually make it to the party (she just won't give in to Castle and he's trying very hard - but maybe those hormones will gradually make her see sense).
Great writing as usual - especially the last couple of sentences. You have the characters spot on and I can see the scene playing out in front of me. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Please keep updating. I love this story b/c it's very original.
Oh yeah, Firefly rules! I always wanted to read a fanfic with Kate as Inara and Rick as Mal.
i love this! a halloween party, yay, i'm so excited! :D
This is just awesome. I love your fanfic, really. I really hope that the halloween party brings some progress to their relationship.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I liked the conversation between her and her dad. I feel that the story is unfinished. You should consider continuing it. Interesting how much what her father said at the end to Beckett paralleled what Captain Montgomery said to her in Knockout.
Definitely, the story is unfished. There's still a lot of resolution to come. Sorry if my author's note was misleading. Trust me. You'll know when it's done.
Thank you for taking the time to write a review.
OK, drop everything you're doing and write more story before I suffer serious withdrawal pain - *that's* how much I like your writing!! (But I'm serious, really, stop all other activities......). I love the scene where Beckett walks into the break room and the boys and Lanie just freeze....nothing suspicious about that, right? I can just picture it in my head, exactly what their expressions would be. The dinner with Martha, and the phone call Castle makes early the next morning - priceless. This last chapter, with Beckett and her Dad was so sweet, as he gently helps her see things from a different perspective.
So, did I mention I'd really like more chapters (plural) and soon? I can't wait to see how it all turns out in the end! Seriously, I will be checking daily for another chapter.....
Well? Did you ever go back and read the finished product? I can't blame you for losing track though. :-)
Have just found your story and am loving it. The essence of the characters is really coming through, so much so, that I just want to knock their heads together and shout at them to sort themselves out.
Your story must be good to evoke that sort of reaction.
Cannot wait for the next chapter !!!